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Once I behed the darkest scene,
I dreamt it last night in my dreams,
A story of a cryptic love,
Lost too soon to pain & blood.

I saw two lovers dressed in woe,
The woman in her long, white dress, soon to wed,
The man's head to her chest.
He listned to her trembling heart,
Knowing soon they would be apart.

Soon a girl came to fetch the maiden,
Only moments too late.

Crimson poured past both lovers lips;
Their corpse's embracing in their final kiss.

Not every love is happily ever after and I hope you remember that from here on after.
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Author's Comments

... i litrally opned my eyes thismorning & graped my pen & started writing on the spiral i keep by my bed, so its not that great. I think i got it cause I watched 'Corpse Bride' right before i fell asleep.

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:iconnightshadespromise:
*blush* thank you!

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:music: "And I can live without you, but, without you i'd be misrable at best"
.... scratch that- I CAN NOT live without you.
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:iconnightshadespromise:
Awww, thank you!

Oh! Thanks for the fav too!

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:music: "And I can live without you, but, without you i'd be misrable at best"
.... scratch that- I CAN NOT live without you.
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Your Welcome, you diserve it~ :3
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:music: "And I can live without you, but, without you i'd be misrable at best"
.... scratch that- I CAN NOT live without you.
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I absolutely love this piece. Nice job, Raven. This is nice.

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Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

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Awww, thank you Ty!

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:music: "And I can live without you, but, without you i'd be misrable at best"
.... scratch that- I CAN NOT live without you.

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