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Lost in thought
I drift away
To a relm of peace
Atleast for today

No screaming
No more fear
No more blood
No more tears

They say im a free one
A dreamer of sorts
If only they knew why i never wear shorts
The cuts
The bruses
So easy to see
So i close my eyes and pretend
Pretend im not me
©2008-2009 ~Nightshadespromise
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noone seems to care about child abuse. i do. if you know of any please report it before its too late.
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that's a pretty amazing poem. I don't really hear about things like that near me, but I have read sad books and heard about things like that on the news. It's pretty sad and there aren't a lot of ways to help. This is a good way to open eyes though.

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thank you. its common these days,but children are afraid to tell anyone. im glad that you understand and commented on this. thank you.

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I would offer moral support but my morals are questionable.

CARPE NANQUAM
Yeah, it's horrible what humans are capable of doing to each other, especially to kids. I like this peom, It makes so much sense to me. Great work as always!

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"My dreams are my life. Reality, though, is my inspiration for those dreams."- Anon.
SUPPORT THE WRITERS!! THEY'RE ARTISTS TOO!!!
[link] in case I forget my emotions at home.
thanks,its one of my better ones i think. and i feel sorry for the kids who are/were abused

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I would offer moral support but my morals are questionable.

CARPE NANQUAM
It is very horrible. I'm just glad that I have my mom and dad. they've always been good to me. My mom worked at a battered womens shelter and had to deal with the kids the women brought with them. Alot ofthem were also being hurt. I can only hope it gets better, you know. Some people just have no right having kids.

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"My dreams are my life. Reality, though, is my inspiration for those dreams."- Anon.
SUPPORT THE WRITERS!! THEY'RE ARTISTS TOO!!!
[link] in case I forget my emotions at home.
Yeah,its sorta a been there done that thing for me, thats why the poem sounds right, my mum and i wernt so lucky with my real father. my step father is ok though.

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I would offer moral support but my morals are questionable.

CARPE NANQUAM
Oh I'm so sorry... I'm glad that your doing better. No wonder your poem was so well written...I hope you never have to go through that again! :C

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"My dreams are my life. Reality, though, is my inspiration for those dreams."- Anon.
SUPPORT THE WRITERS!! THEY'RE ARTISTS TOO!!!
[link] in case I forget my emotions at home.
its ok,its over now and my mum & i are fine. And yeah,thats why the poem was any good.

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I would offer moral support but my morals are questionable.

CARPE NANQUAM
THATS AN AMAZING POEM! I ONCE HEARD OF SOMONE WHO WAS ABUSED. IT WAS SAD.=( STILL ITS AN AMAZING POEM!=)

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LiTtLe KiTtEnS fLy In ThE SkY, wItH GuNs AnD kNiVeS sTrApEd To ThEiR lItTlE bOdYs YeLlInG "wOrLd DoMiNaTiOn!"

Then they befriend the little frogies and the kittys and the frogies take over the world!


Then they demand to have chocolate cheesecake!

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